What do you think of my poem? It called True Love?
BigChris asked:
True love is like a shooting star moving through the sky,
True love is like a heart shape strawberry pie.
True love is like sitting outside looking at the moon,
True love is like staying home watching your favorite cartoon.
True love is like a red rose that surely never dies,
True love is never saying farewell or good byes.
True love come once a lifetime that is what they say,
True love is when two people care for each other everyday.
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True love is like a shooting star moving through the sky,
True love is like a heart shape strawberry pie.
True love is like sitting outside looking at the moon,
True love is like staying home watching your favorite cartoon.
True love is like a red rose that surely never dies,
True love is never saying farewell or good byes.
True love come once a lifetime that is what they say,
True love is when two people care for each other everyday.
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February 17th, 2008 at 5:46 pm
I love this poem! it’s amazing with all the word choice and the rhyme scheme!:)
great job! awesome work:)
keep up the awesome work:)
ohh but one tiny little thing from my point of view… in rthe second last line you say true love COME? did u mean to say comes?
February 20th, 2008 at 11:11 am
You have a talent to express your feelings. What you need is sharpening your angles. Increase your vocabulary and keep your simplicity intact.
February 21st, 2008 at 6:23 am
wow that is really good….i asked the same question on here and i got 2 answers and they were both saying it was a bad poem so i think i gonna quit tryin to write them bc obvioulsy mine r bad but good luck w/ yours!
February 22nd, 2008 at 10:06 am
great poem. you have talent.my wife and i loved it.
February 24th, 2008 at 1:21 am
Great poem. I like your word choice.